Five Sentence Fiction – Learning

I’m taking every step carefully.

Learning to feel the solid ground under my feet and walk on my own.

I’m trying not to choke on the air that I’m gasping for.

Learning to breathe.

Balancing on the edge of this evanescent moment, I’m learning to be.


Inspired by this week’s FSF prompt.


6 Comments Add yours

  1. Od Liam says:

    Each instant of life…

    The eternal mystery of learning!

    Beautifully written!

    Od Liam

  2. A lovely piece which explains how we can feel sometimes when learning something is proving tricky. I get a sense of perseverance from your piece too. xx

  3. K. R. Smith says:

    I learned a new word here (evanescent). Good work.

  4. Joe Owens says:

    We learn every day, we have to so we can continue to live.

  5. Excellent! Sorry it took so long to get to it!

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