Five Sentence Fiction – Thunder

Lightning in your eyes. Thunder in my heart. I watched the rain roll down your cheeks as we stood in the middle of a downpour. Promises were made, walls burnt down.

I don’t need them when you’re my home.


Inspired by this week’s FSF prompt.


7 Comments Add yours

  1. Melanie Cole says:

    What a beautiful story. Really, really well done!!

  2. McGuffy Ann says:

    This is simply beautiful.

  3. Wow, Kate–this is stunningly beautiful. Just gorgeous writing—grabbed my heart and won’t let go.

    1. mrsreckless says:

      Wow, thank you so much! This has really made me smile! 🙂

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